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WARNING: It's an oc comic. If you hate/dislike ocs, please ignore this.

Omahgod. That drawing of Near is a bit realism xD bahaha kay ignore that.

Linda , Near (c) Death note

Neru (c) me
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sakurahr Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
ah! O-O ehh!!! quiero mas!!
cute doujin
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Otromeru Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, dear! (;3;)
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Beautifulriver1098 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
I gotta say I just recently discovered this (due to my friend suggesting this) and it's F*ckin awesome! So did you just stop continuing this? Cus' if you did, you should so continue it. It's really good.
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Jeenso Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Did you like abandon this.
YOU LEFT IT TO DIE ALL LONELY AND COLD.
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Otromeru Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LET IT DIE. I'M TOO LAZY
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Jeenso Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh you horrible creature xD
jk
but but I like it ... ;u;
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Shius Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
I saw the rest of your comic. It's awesome. XD

Are you planning to continue it?

It seems kind of a shame that the comic ends where the story begins. :\
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Otromeru Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol Thanks!
Yeah i'm gonna continue it after i finish the commissions.
I'm still thinking of ideas about this comic though :/
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Shius Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
If you don't have any, can I give you some basic plots and story lines? :D
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Otromeru Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YES! THAT WOULD BE GREAT!:iconsupertighthugplz:
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Shius Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Sooo, do you know what Neru or Linda's gonna do right after?
Oh yeah, can you lightly explain Linda's character to me?
It seems like the Linda in my head, and the Linda in yours is VERY different. ^^;
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Otromeru Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Maybe.. Linda will scold Neru for looking at her sketchbook.
So Neru critiques Linda's drawing of Near to show Lin that she doesn't
like him (but actually she does)and blah blah blah. So Neru goes to the
library and stalk Near and feels guilty for having a crush on him
..... well it's a long story xD :iconorzplz:

Linda? Hm.. in my story, she's Neru's BFF. Linda is the type of person who
goes by the rules. She's quite sensitive but a caring person. Yeah..
something like that.
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Shius Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
As an idea for the library part, why don't you make it so that Neru leaves the library (After feeling guilty of herself) and Near sees her leaving, and he does either:

1. Calls her back and asks her why she was following him, and she replies that she needs something from the library, or she was studying and so and so, and Near (Maybe a little disappointed) lets go of her. After an awkward silence, Neru asks Near how he feels about Linda.
the rest you can imagine from here. :D

2 Or he grabs her by the arm as she leaves, and asks her why she followed him, and he finds out that Neru likes him.
And from there it becomes a love-triangle. O.O

Either way, it seems it'll end with Neru having to choose over Near or Linda.



...Yeah, I think your story will turn out pretty long. :o
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Otromeru Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
woah that's a good idea!
But I would really prefer if Near is in his character.
Neru and Near aren't really friends or even close friends.
Since Linda likes him and Mello hates him, she tries to
get rid her feelings towards him. So I thought when she was in the library (stalking
Near) , Near noticed that she was stalking him. But then, Mello and Matt grab her
and took her at the back of the library (where no one can see them)
Mello asked her where she hide his chocolates but Neru wouldn't admit. Near saw what happened
and asked Mello and Matt what they're doing. He thought that they're bullying Neru.

...so.. whaddaya think? xD and yeah. I was planning to make a long comic. Muehehe.
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Shius Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Sorry, I forgot to add this in the last message.

Is this the first time Neru falls in love with Near, or did she already have a liking toward him before this incident?
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Otromeru Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just realized this comment from you.
Aaaaaaargh i'm so sorry DDX
Neru falls in love with him the first time she saw him.
Before she even met Linda owo
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Shius Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Woooaah, THAT IS FAST GURL XD
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